Thursday, 5 May 2016

Language analysis on each of the peoms

1. Song (When I am dead, my dearest)


"Plant thou no roses at my head"
  • About remembrance, death, mourning
  • Attitudes to process of mourning - resignation, acceptance, forbearance
  • Not accepting, not trying to change but being patient/ tolerant
  • Accepts way things are but still sees it needs changing
  • Working against convention
  • Metrical variation - stress falls on imperative - adds confidence / inner strength / quiet strong voice
  • Tetrameter
"... dreaming through the twilight"
  • Euphemism for death - softens it - making it easier to accept
2. From The Antique
  • Addresses sense of disappointment with how the world is
  • Strength of narrator as deals with disappointment
  • Acceptance with recognition that not right
"Still the world would wag on the same
Still the seasons come and go:"
  • Tetrameter - reinforces strength and forbearance
  • Repetition - disappointment and recognition that things are going to continue in the same way without her - acceptance of her own lack of importance
  • "Wag on" - colloquial - softens whilst also presenting issues - drawing attention to it
"Not so much as a grain of dust"
  • Insignificance of the individual
  • Sense of selflessness - looking beyond ego
3. Remember


"Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad"
  • Metrical variation  - iambic pentameter to interrupted, complex, unconventional
"Remember me when no more day by day
You tell me of our future that you plann'd:"
  • Feminist angle - pronoun use, repetition
  • Highlighting constraints
  • Emphasises disaffection with gender relationships and patriarchal control
  • Complex attitudes towards it


4. Echo
  • Return of a dead lover
"Oh dream how sweet, too sweet, too bitter sweet"
  • Iambic pentameter
  • Sense of progression of thoughts
  • Realises that the sweetness is overwhelming and tinged with sadness
  • Nostalgia - sadness associated
  • Repetition, listing
"Pulse for pulse, breath for breath:"
  • Tetrameter - reinforces the breathing and the life it has
  • A living dream - a living memory
5. Shut out
  • A poem of loss - feeling when unable to return to a lost state
  • Garden is an analogy/symbol for a state of mind
  • Ambiguous
"And good they are, but not the best;
And dear they are, but not so dear."
  • Nostalgia - the past was wonderful when looking back
  • Parallelism highlights it
  • Tetrameter
  • Sense of longing and acceptance
  • Longing to change but recognises it's impossible
  • Melancholy - sense of quiet, enduring sadness
"The spirit was silent; but he took
Mortar and stone to build a wall;"
  • Personification - symbolic
  • Symbolises restrictions that Victorian women faced
6. In The Round Tower at Jhansi
  • Narrative poem
  • Third person narrator
  • Lots of dialogue
""Is the time come?" - "The time is come!"
  • Resignation, strength, bravery
  • Not panicked or emotional - attitude of stoicism - stoic
  • Facing set-backs with calm and inner strength
  • Rossetti praising them - moral lesson to us
  • Seems to look to husband for reassurance
  • Parallelism - support/together in speech - supporting each other
"'I wish I could bear the pang alone:"
  • Selfless
7. A Birthday


"My heart is like an apple-tree
Whose boughs are bent with thickset fruit"
  • Simile - joy, celebration
  • Emphasis on ripeness - readiness, opportunity - this is my moment
  • Influence of Romantic poets - using natural imagery to illustrate human emotions
8. Maude Clare
  • Narrative poem
  • First person but an observer
  • Lots of dialogue
"Here's my half of the golden chain
You wore about your neck,
That day we waded ankle-deep
For lilies in the beck:"
  • Maude Clare - adventurous, unconventional
  • Shouldn't be together without a chaperone
  • Accepting and seeking sensuous experience
  • Symbolic of their adventurous seeking of sensuous pleasures
  • He is above her and male
  • Against sense of constraint - says in front of whole congregation
  • Strong
9. Up-hill
  • Question and answer, question and answer
  • Interrogative
"Does the road wind up hill all the way?"
  • Analogy - Journey = life - common analogy
  • Life as something to be endured
"Yes to the very end"
  • Doesn't hide from the truth but offers hope and reassurance
  • Rossetti found stoicism in belief - found ability to continue in a difficult life through religion
  • Religion not trying to hide - it is a struggle
10. No, Thank You John


"Let us strike hands as hearty friends;"
  • First person narrator
  • Strong - trying to teach a man endurance and strength in the face of disappointment
  • Seen through imperative
  • Unconventional

Sunday, 28 February 2016

Writing about poetry

Rhythm/metre

  • Pentameter
  • Tetrameter
  • Trimeter
  • Dimeter
Metrical variation
  • Foot
  • Iamb ( _ / ) (iambic)
  • Trochee ( / _ ) (trochaic)
  • Spondee ( / / ) (spondaic)
  • Anapaest ( _ _ / ) (anapaestic)
  • Dactyl ( / _ _ ) (dactylic)
Rhyme
  • Regular
  • Irregular
  • Internal
Sound Patterns
  • Alliteration
  • Assonance
  • Consonance
Write about effect

emphasises / places emphasis upon / reinforces / highlights / draws our attention to / supports / suggests / implies/

Writing About Metre Examples

Song (When I am dead, my dearest)

The tetrameter of two iambs and an amphibrach is broken away from in the line "Sing no sad songs for me". This metrical variation coupled with the assonance serves to emphasis this line and highlight the importance that Rossetti attaches to the addressee moving on.


Good Friday

The stresses of the iambic feet in the line "Am I a stone, and not a sheep," land on a few key words including "stone" and "stone" that have religious

Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Scene 3

Poker night (original title for the play)
  • Strong, masculine, violent
  • Steve tells a joke about sex (and priorities) - masculine joking


"Hello the little boys room is busy right now"
  • Feminine flirting
  • First meeting and the conversation is about physical needs (mitch needs a wee)
"Gallantry"
  • Old world style of courtship
  • Rough relationship between Stanley and Stella is something Blanche can't relate to
  • Stanley is not gallant

Scene 2

The paperwork represents the past - the baby represents the future
Blanche is sexual but will not have children - she has no future to offer it




"...thousands of papers, stretching back over hundreds of years effecting Belle Reve..."
- Since before the civil war
- A time of slavery and plantations




"epic fornications"
Resulted in two very different sisters
Stella presented as loyal and positive


When does the audience see blanche as a lost cause?
-When see passes cemeteries to Elysian fields - Alive but dead?
- She doesn't die
- She is always clutching at straws - latches onto the doctor - any hope of another chance


Property
  • Stanley keeps going on about the Napoleonic code
  • Eunice says "we own this place"
  • Blanche doesn't own anything
  • - Maybe why her body is so important to her
  • - She bathes constanly
"I was flirting with your husband"
  • Only thing Blanche knows how to do
  • She believes that's what men want
  • irresponsible - doesn't know how to be responsible


"Tragic nobility that redeems Blanche"

Wednesday, 10 February 2016

Scene 7 - Quotes

Quotes

STANLEY: (mimicking) 'soaking in a hot tub'? pg 69

STANLEY: And you run and get her cokes, I suppose? And serve 'em to her majesty in the tub" pg 69

STELLA: I've got things to do." pg 69

STANLEY: (mimicking) 'soaking in a hot tub'?

STELLA: Stanley, stop picking on Blanche. pg 69

STELLA: ... You've got to realise that Blanche and I grew up under very different circumstances than you did." pg 70

STANLEY: So I've been told. And told and told and told. You know she's been feeding us a pack of lies here?" pg 70

STANLEY: Some canary bird, huh! pg 70

STANLEY: But sister Blanche is no lily! Ha-ha! Some lily she is! pg 70

Stanley refers to Blanche as "Dame Blanche" a couple of time pg 71

STELLA: What - contemptible - lies!" pg 71

"Stella draws back"

STANLEY: For the last year or two she has been washed up like poison" pg 71

"Possess your soul in patience"

"Laughs harshly"

"In the first place Blanche won't go on a bus"

"The distant piano goes into a hectic breakdown"

Wednesday, 27 January 2016

Lights, sound and action in the play


  • Blanche hates light - light represents truth, age
  • Stanley grabs, bigger, stronger action
  • Blanche's jewellery looks glamorous but is fake - Like Blanche symbolic of facade - not real or authentic
  • Harsh light represents harsh truth - Mitch drags Blanche into the light
  • Throws radio out the window
  • Other poker players all masculine - contrast
  • Stanley and Stella's sex life symbolised by "Coloured lights"
  • Blanche's clothes mark her as an outsider
  • Dim light at the birthday party - dark situation - trapped
  • Stella makes it obvious that Stanley owns her
  • Vasvouvian Polka - simplistic, light hearted, childish, innocent - pathos
  • Blue piano goes into hectic breakdown - Blanche's breakdown of mentality

Can mention the film but it is a play!

Old South and New America

Elements of gothic literature - Tense, suspenseful, macabre events, supernatural elements, deranged and damaged characters

Macabre events - Blanche's Husband's suicide
Supernatural elements - Past events haunting
Deranged and damaged characters - Blanche

Belle Reve means beautiful dreams - it is ironic why?
- It is introduced as being lost
- It is never a reality in the play

Blanche -

  • Not down to earth
  • Lives in a dream
  • Racist
  • Talks in an archaic, out dated way
  • Way she likes to be treated
Stanley
  • He is straight talking
  • Harsh
  • Masculine
  • Uses colloquial language
What they wear is important

Blanche - white clothes, neat, fine, vulnerable, easily destroyed
Stanley - Rough, hard wearing clothes

Blanche's loss of mentality reflects loss of the old America

Rape - death of culture
  • Europeans colonised America in 1500-1600 - french name from this time - landowning
  • Kowalski, polish - immigrant
Symbols - death of old America
  • Blanche's "students no longer interested"
  • Stanley throws radio playing classical music out of the window
Blanche's health
  • Lost Belle Reve through excess
  • Old family corrupt - gambling, slavery, exploitation 
Just after war in 1945 - civil war

No help from other classes to save belle reve
Past catching up with her
Family buried like rubbish
Elysian fields - joke to Blanche

Events are symbolic

Street car named desire goes to cemeteries - progression of the play

  • Stanley lively, loud
  • Multicultural, less reserved
  • Blanche doesn't fit in
  • Blanche escapes into imaginary world
  • Stanley destroys it by calling it all lies
  • Handing over of papers